Improved ReadMe.md.

Changelog.md

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 ## Unversioned Changes
 
+* Improved ReadMe.md. - *Simon Sarasova*
+* Improved ReadMe.md, Whitepaper.md, and Documentation.md. - *Simon Sarasova*
 * Upgraded Fyne to version 2.5.1. - *Simon Sarasova*
 * Improved ReadMe.md and Whitepaper.md. - *Simon Sarasova*
 * Improved ReadMe.md. - *Simon Sarasova*

Contributors.md

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 Name | Date Of First Commit | Number Of Commits
 --- | --- | ---
-Simon Sarasova | June 13, 2023 | 291
+Simon Sarasova | June 13, 2023 | 293

ReadMe.md

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 **Seekia is a genetics aware mate discovery network.**
 
-Seekia is a mate discovery network where users can find a mate while having a deep awareness of each potential partner's genetics.
+Seekia is a mate discovery network where users can find a mate while having a deep awareness of each potential mate's genetics.
 
 Users can share genetic information in their profiles such as monogenic disease probabilities, allele values, and ancestry.
 
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 Seekia aims to improve the genetic quality of humanity by making humans healthier, more beautiful, more intelligent, more virtuous, and happier. Seekia aims to facilitate eugenic breeding by helping to create mate pairings which are the most likely to produce healthy, beautiful, intelligent, virtuous, and happy offspring.
 
-The goal of Seekia is to accelerate the world's adoption of genetics aware mate discovery technology, and to help the world mate in a genetics aware manner.
+The goal of Seekia is to accelerate humanity's adoption of genetics aware mate discovery technology, and to help humanity mate in a genetics aware manner.
 
 ### Learn More
 

documentation/Documentation.md

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 ## What is Seekia?
 
-Seekia is a mate discovery network where users can find a mate while having a deep awareness of each potential partner's genetics.
+Seekia is a mate discovery network where users can find a mate while having a deep awareness of each potential mate's genetics.
 
 Users can share genetic information in their profiles such as monogenic disease risks, allele values, and ancestry.
 

documentation/Whitepaper.md

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 To help facilitate eugenic breeding and give people insight into the genetics of their potential mates, I present Seekia: a genetics aware mate discovery network.
 
-Seekia is a mate discovery network where users can find a mate while having a deep awareness of each potential partner's genetics.
+Seekia is a mate discovery network where users can find a mate while having a deep awareness of each potential mate's genetics.
 
 Users can share genetic information in their profiles such as monogenic disease probabilities, allele values, and ancestry.