Improved ReadMe.md.

Changelog.md

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 ## Unversioned Changes
 
+* Improved ReadMe.md. - *Simon Sarasova*
 * Improved Seekia's slogan and Whitepaper.md. - *Simon Sarasova*
 * Added an Estimated Time Remaining label to 2 processes within the Create Genetic Models utility. - *Simon Sarasova*
 * Split the createGeneticAnalysis package into 2 packages: createPersonGeneticAnalysis and createCoupleGeneticAnalysis. - *Simon Sarasova*

Contributors.md

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 Name | Date Of First Commit | Number Of Commits
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-Simon Sarasova | June 13, 2023 | 259
+Simon Sarasova | June 13, 2023 | 261

ReadMe.md

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 Users can view information about the health and physical traits of their prospective offspring for each user.
 
-Seekia aims to improve the genetic quality of humanity by making humans healthier, more beautiful, more intelligent, more virtuous, and happier. Seekia aims to facilitate eugenic breeding by helping to create mate pairings which are the most likely to produce healthy, beautiful, intelligent, virtuous, and happy offspring.
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 Users can choose to mate with users with whom their offspring has a lower probability of having diseases and a higher probability of having certain traits.
 
+Seekia aims to improve the genetic quality of humanity by making humans healthier, more beautiful, more intelligent, more virtuous, and happier. Seekia aims to facilitate eugenic breeding by helping to create mate pairings which are the most likely to produce healthy, beautiful, intelligent, virtuous, and happy offspring.
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 The goal of Seekia is to accelerate the world's adoption of race and genetics aware mate discovery technology, and to help the world mate in a race and genetics aware manner.
 
 ### Learn More

documentation/Whitepaper.md

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 To demonstrate my point, let's compare humans and races to movies. There is no greatest movie, but there are still good movies and bad movies. Similarly, there does not exist a singular person or race which possesses the highest genetic quality, but there are higher and lower genetic quality humans and races.
 
-The movie "The Matrix" (1999) is far more commonly enjoyed than "Battlefield Earth" (2000), thus, it is a higher quality movie. Similarly, a gorgeous, intelligent, witty, dazzling, kind firefighter is much more desired and loved than an ugly, diseased, depressed, crippled, deceptive, rude, thieving thug. Someone in our world may prefer the thug over the firefighter, but on average, humanity prefers the firefighter's genetic traits.
+The movie "The Matrix" (1999) is far more commonly enjoyed than "Battlefield Earth" (2000), thus, it is a higher quality movie. Similarly, a gorgeous, intelligent, witty, dazzling, healthy, kind firefighter is much more desired and loved than an ugly, diseased, schizophrenic, crippled, deceptive, rude, thieving thug. Someone in our world may prefer the thug over the firefighter, but on average, humanity prefers the firefighter's genetic traits.
 
 The world becomes a better place when it has more good movies and fewer bad movies. Similarly, the world becomes a better place when it is populated with humans and races of a higher genetic quality rather than those of a lower genetic quality.